Anna Graham

Lower Byklaw Entrance Two. Will looked around the little cabin as Napodi hurried off to find her father. It was small and rustic, yet had an almost homey feeling to ...

Ok, first of all, I gotta say, this is great! You have a unique writing style, and it alone keeps me interested. "The sand in my face felt like gravel ...

Lol! I love it! This story definitely has potential! You convinced me they were real people and I got so sucked in, i forgot to look for things to correct! ...

Great!! Thanks, guys! I can't wait to get to work! Cyber-five! --Anna

Lol! I love the tone! It's light, sarcastic, and amusing! I love how you compare that poor boy to different animals. The only advice I have for you is to ...

When Will woke up, he groaned. It felt as if his head had just split open. After tenderly reaching a hand up to reassure himself that his skull was still ...

Intriguing! I like how it tells a story. It's creative and you've got some great wording so far. I liked the bits about dragons and goblins that are your reasons ...

Once the last bell rang for the day, Will walked dejectedly through the crowd of students towards the school doors. History was such a pointless class. He didn’t think he’d ...

Neil Underwood is my guess. Doesn't he look like a Neil?

I like it! It's definitely a more common subject, but I think you did well with it. The rhyming didn't sound forced, and you had a lot of creative wording. ...

Thanks! Yeah, this wasn't actually meant to be the end of the chapter, but the real chapter is really long. They said that you should probably shorten it to about ...

The Stone William Stone rushed into the dim cave, breathing hard. He gently put a hand up to the right side of his head and felt it throb painfully beneath ...

I like it! You've got some great imagery here, like "Standing under the crooked tree With its crippled limbs and misshapen leaves," my favorite is the first stanza: "I know ...

Wow. Honestly, this poem took my breath away. Give me a sec to catch it and I'll see if I can tell you why. The imagery: gorgeous. I felt everything ...

Well, it sounds to me like the imagination, but that's just me. "It is a nothing (it has no mass) but extends further than the universe. Only there may a ...